This was a fantastic write. The words you pieced together folded out into a masterpiece. Though my recommendation is definitely yo fix up you're grammer and capitalization. Not to say I will rate this lower because of that, though I definitely found it much to my distaste.

Also, I was a bit upset with the clear label you plastered upon yourself the stereotypical name of 'emo'. Since, I felt for your poem and could easily relate, as well as fall under said stereotypical category, I did NOT like the use of it. But that's just my opinion ^^;; A great write overall. 5/5

You commented on one of my poems, so i thought it'd only be fair if i checked out your work.

this reminds me of one of my exs, i like it