6th line? I think you mis-typed something, sorry it isn't very clear. Apart from that i like it, you have a talent in expression.

Are u also that strong in real life az in ur poems ?? .. think deeply about it
OH any by the way .. GREAT POEM ;)

I apprecate your honesty. I respect the fact that you did not sugar coat, not even one bit of your wisdom. I appreciate you your opinion and I will work towards making better poems. thank you for your time.

This is really great.