Brilliant morning has arrived

I really loved the starting of this poem.

Silent wonder fills the air
Uniting all your senses
Blissful moments without care

And then everything flowed elegantly.

Rainbows bright colors calling
Fate now ready to descend
Destiny beyond the clouds
Final chapter comes to an end

Loved the way you made a journey through this poem coming to an end. Beautiful poem indeed.

all the best and take care

Life is like the final chapter in a book. I am always sad to reach it because I know I am at the end. But the good thing is I can move on to another book. Well done.

Cindy,
First let me say that you done a great job with the challenge. Second, I thought you really brought a depth to the sadness you write about. As though the journey you have been on has been well worth the trip, and now you are ready to retire and meet the end. Sometimes life is like that. great Job.

Take Care,
Kay

There are those wonderful things & colors
around us yet we cannot touch or feel it
cause fate will take it away soon...a touching
write..take care.

You have always showed depth to the sadness in which you write and this piece though sad is beautifully penned my friend.
You never failed to meet any challenge.Every stanza a favorite.
Great job.
Paul...

Nicely written. From my understanding, I think you're trying to illustrate the start of a new morning to the end of the day. The imaginary presented in this poem is brilliant.
Excellent Job.Keep it up;)