Wow... this was a sad poem but kinda confusing.

You stand there holding the hand of the woman you now love; reading my tombstone that's covered in flowers saying that I died too young.

*This was my favorite part. I really love how you express yourself here. Very sad poem, but well written. Nice work. Nik*

I thought this poem is a great reflection on "regret" and i think it was well written although slightly confusing mainly because of how it was set out.. maybe spacing it out.. making the lines more defined this problem could be fixed .. just a suggestion

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