This is incredible. I felt like I was there, entranced. Very well written.

Excellent piece Maya! The emotions were so real and alive, you really made the reader feel what you were feeling. Each line was captivating and held my attention throughout, nicely done. This was such a heartbreaking poem, and you expressed your emotions weel. A great read, so glad you are back on! Hope things get better.
Take care and God Bless!

~MaryAnne