Nice work. The style is different but it works for what your trying to say. I can relate to what your saying, Nice work. Shanik

I can feel ur pain. This poem is really well written and has alot of meaning of what some people r gng thru

A very sad and emtional poem, but you know if you dont look then you cant get dissapointed (pml dont listen to me im a cynical pessimist) Im sure you'l find ur other half, a very well writeen poem =] great job

Awesome work!! good writer! 5/5! =3 laterz!

I like it, Its really descriptive which is great, and its full of emotions. Its original, written in a differet way to what most poems are which is awesome =] Great work. 5/5

Strong feelings and emotions in this piece, your opinion of love and the fear that goes along with it, and getting hurt and everything else. I liked how this was more of a prose- but it worked nicely and your thoughts were well expressed. Nice work.

Fear of love
*We all in some aspect have a fear of love because things always happen to change it. Wonderful start*
Is it worth the anger is it worth the strain to love to feel the pain? Trying to love just to get knocked down again.
*The simple answer to these wuestions is NO but we all want love even though we don't need it because some of us (I believe) would be happier without it because we find love then get knocked down again because our heart has been broken. Powerful stanza.*
I've been looking for my other half searching in the dark looking for that spark. Fading away beginning to decay the spark dies and so i stay in the dark.
*Quite a confusing stanza but it just goes to show how confusing love can be at times. We all search for this spark you talk about but get left in the dark because it was either never there in the first place or the spark was a lie. Wonderful stanza.*
Soul mate is a lie just leaving more scars on your heart before you die.
*FLAWLESS, very true and inspiring.*
Love the feeling of wholeness only leads to more sorrow growing inside evermore hollow.
*Once again, a true stanza. Unique and flawless.*
to love
to be used
to fall
*Such a powerful ending and very true aswell. We love, we sometimes get used and then we fall. On the whole a wonderfull written, powerful and emotional poem. 5/5, Em*