Shuld have been more like her

by Briana   May 18, 2009


Her eyes sparkle
Mine only drop tears
Her charisma is a sensation
And all i have is my fears

When youre with her in a crowd
Shes the only one you see
But when we were together
You wouldn't even glance at me

Her beauty is unforgettable
She wont be denied
I know i cant compare
It wouldn't even matter whats on the inside

Shes the perfect girl
I only have flaws
You know shes the one
I'm just a lost cause

I'm looking through the window
And you're on the other side
My watery eyes fade your image into a blur
I guess i should have been more like her.

a.c.g.
5-17-09 8:05pm

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  • 14 years ago

    by SiLeNt

    Wow dis poem has a lot o emotion
    but i say dnt compare urself to someone else
    everyone is always differnent but thats at makes u,you
    im sur eull find that one

  • 14 years ago

    by jojo

    Omg...i really enjoyed this piece, especially the last stanza it really grasped my attention. it flows very well too.

    I'm looking through the window
    And you're on the other side
    My watery eyes fade your image into a blur
    I guess i should have been more like her.

    that last line gave me chills because i was thinking of writing a poem similar to this concept but urs is wayy better. keep writing!!

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