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  • 14 years ago

    by Stephanie Michelle

    "Screaming internally,
    For someone to save me.
    Being unwanted wasn't something I learned,
    It came naturally. "

    Great stanza. I love how you worded what you wanted to portray. Very unique.

    This poem made me want to read more of your writing. Great job


  • 14 years ago

    by Fire Catches

    This was great
    Each line I read was filled with alot of emotions
    Great Job!

  • 14 years ago

    by Mushh

    This is beautiful m'love

  • 14 years ago

    by Kimberley

    With the break of dawn
    I'm reminded why I've remained alone.
    Staring at pictures of strangers
    Once loved ones, now people I don't know.

    i really liked this part. when i connect to something i'm really taken away by it and that's just what this stanza did. the over all poem is fabuous and i love it. great job!!! keep it up! 5/5. ~kim

  • 14 years ago

    by Exostosis

    "The doctor gave me a biopsy and with a red pen
    He marked an X
    On my heart, were it's diseased.
    I wish someone would have saved me. "

    this was super awesome. . . something like this is very rare....because this sort of thoughts dont usually come to mind...

    beside that..very well written ..could feel the pain. . it hurts to miss someone caz youno longer talk to them...and when you think of them you can hardly remember their laughs...their tears....their silly smile..=(

    keep up the good work ..:D