This poem maybe good. But it would have always remained incomplete without your contributions and Ingrid aka Maya's help. I think the best part of this poem was being ready to pick up the love life after a few hiccups. It has been such a great pleasure to rewrite and reread this poem again and again and again....

Keep up the great work. Because the day is not far when your brilliant ideas and poems will be seen on the homepage of this website.

Well done. Rekindled love is best because it was true in the first place and just had to take a break. True love always stays, year after, life after life. Good job with the form.

Kelleyana,

I love this sweet poem by you and Bhavin:)

It's not easy to make a Retourne, but you two pulled it off:)

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

Kellyana
you both did a wonderful job on this form :)
Take Care
Cindy

Very Nicely Penned!!!

I love the structure of the poem.
"Opened up a frail heart to love
with eyes closing doors on despair
dreaming of love to flow like stream
leaving pains beyond existence."

I love that stanza.

Great job. 5/5