You have not lost your touch for writing a
song & this one was simply truthful, simple
yet sad..nicely done :)

Beautifully done. You still amaze me. Would love to hear this sang, wow. My favorite:

'What a shame, that such a beautiful thing could die,
It's like watching a life-giving stream dry;
And nothing sings, and nothing breathes,
As the sound of life leaves with the breeze.'

...and
'What a shame, that love is not endless,
It's like trying to hold onto a phantom caress;
And nothing warms you, in the deep freeze,
As the sound of life leaves with the breeze'

You're a force to be reckoned with, such talent!