This is very well done this is really a well done poem and feel that you wrote this from exp I don't think that you've been to prison if you have it explains it but you wrote very well either way.

It's a poem that adapts a very hard style for me personally to write in. I really liked this poem imagery, description, word choice, structure, these are all really great things and add to the poem in each way.

Only thing I would tell you to watch is your run into sentences, but even then it would be me being too picky and just pointing it out to not seem like I gave it a perfect review and seem like a longer one line reviewer

Anyways awesome job!

5/5

You did a good job putting us in this situation, making us almost feel like we were the cellmate in this cell. Well done with this, not much more I can say.. you really did good with description and imagery.

Temps.
5/5.

The three walls of my cell are cluttered.
Posters, letters, pictures; all fragments,
pieces of my imagination.

*I love this stanza. I feel like you just described my room. I love how raw this poem is. Most people always talk about style and flow, I thought this poem was perfect without both. You let your emotions speak here and that's all that matters. Very nice work my friend. Nik*

I loved this poem.. how it expressed so well what it must mean to be imprisioned.. and how it must feel. You made it so real! I thought it was sad.. and could just imagine the prisoner and their anguish of soul.. with their feeling of helplessness to change what has become them. Superbly written.

Take care,
Olwin

I wanted to sing freedom...loved it

Amazing write...the imagery is superb 5/5

Great poem, I love the dark and cold mood as well the free verse and the metaphors.