"Decades, now,
and fledglings puff tiny chests
and stumble from their past.
Romances hesitates,
hiding among the deepening wrinkles
and glassy, wise eyes."
^ There was something wrong in this stanza..I read too many and's and it didn't appeal good to me.
Also there is a grammatical error here :
"Romances hesitates,"
You can either remove the S in the first word or in the second.

"People live within,
even if they lay still, finally at peace.
They may be two people, but they have one heart. "
^You should give more concern to the closures in the poems..this one didn't say anything new to me.

I liked your opening stanza :) that was a good poem for a love one.
Write on~

I love the free flow here and word choice

It will take some time to compare it to your others
I may try

Rusting trees is a great visual...I think I'll draw that...I have a thing about trees.

You inspire me to want to give another shot at nonrhyming poems. You do it so well.

Great job.

5/5