The poem is good and I could imagine the pendulum moving as I read. It would be really nice if we could do the shape poetry without having to use dots and dashes. (smiles) Well done.

This is such a creative poem. I love that you made it a shape...that's so cool. I'm jealous. Anyways nice work. Nik

I really like reading shape poetry & admire
those who do it well! Love the way you have
written this poem..excellent work!

Shape or concret poetry is a very difficult thing to do. I only made one sofar, about a tree and I know of one other person this site to have tried it too ( came out beautifully btw!)
I think you meant to say the pendulum strikes instead of stikes?

I love the shape and the message, very true indeed:)

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

Woh..this is amazing!! Don`t think I could manage such a task, LOL ..You did it really well. Just awesome.