This is another way to show that imagery is hard to show with words put easy with practical application its easier. You did another good job once again with these poems and their style.

Indeed imagery can be hard to bring into a poem and let your readers imagine it through your words. But with the proper usage of word choice and senses into your poem, you can make a poem full of imagery and the reader can easily see what youre writing. Your poem here is so very simple but speaks a clear and true message. Imagery can be hard to insert into a poem, but with the proper 'application' as you call it, one realizes imagery can actually be quite easy to insert into a poem.

Great job Joe. I thoroughly enjoyed this write and your thoughts.

5/5.

Temps

I liked this. I thought it was very different. I like how you aren't afraid to try different styles. Good work Joe :) Nik