People hurt us.. I just wish we could hurt them back.
Really good, keep it up xx

Intense write, i like it. Very emotional and indepth piece, and yet so simply written. Rhyme scheme was good, didnt seem forced. I liked this write. good job. 5/5

Never let anyone into yur head, yur heart or yur soul ...
They're just to breakable these days.

Immense work & message, 5/5. Em