Falling in love with someone that cannot become a part of your life creates wonderful memories and it hurts at the same time. Well done.

Olwin
This is beautiful and sad at the same time....the emotions are so deep in your words. How hard to love someone that you really can never have entirly :(
Excellent!
Love Cindy

This one is so very simply written. Just a raw poem with so much emotions in it. A poem which hasnt been twisted and turned to please anyone, just simple and deep. Beautiful poem.

all the best and take care

Well Olwin your poem was sweet with a rather melancholy feel about it, over all it was well presented the rhyming was not too bad your syllable count was slightly off in one or two places but again it did not spoil the poem at all.
Well done

Grant

Beautiful job!

5/5

HvN

Great poem! I can relate to that.

I love this poem, you wrote it with such emotion, obviously, it was heartfelt. i can feel your pain, i can relate too, and so naturally, it bought a tear to my eye...beautiful write. i read it for pleasure, so i found no flaws. keep writing!
Mez x