Comments : Beacon

  • 14 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Born unto a world unfair
    Robbed of Heaven's care
    A Writer loses all he one knew
    His plans led askew

    His beauty, fallen before eternity
    Resting in Death's serenity
    Man without his heart
    From his life, He will depart

    The Writer tells the tale
    How life was so frail
    But no matter how his life swirled
    There was a beacon, Light at the end of world

    This is very well written the only thing I would change
    Is the third line in the first quatrain
    "A Writer loses all he one knew"
    A Writer loses all he once knew?

    beautiful poem