Comments : Tripping On Sunshine

  • 14 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    This is really good. I like the message it gives off. Nice positive vibes. It may not be perfect, but the feeling it gives off to me makes up for the imperfections. Five.

  • 14 years ago

    by KemistryKia

    [[loved]] itt..[[5]]/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    LOVED reading this... very well written and expressed. A brilliant write!

    All the Best,

  • 14 years ago

    by BurriedFaceDown

    Tripping on the sunshine that's been given to me
    Throwing it around for the whole world to see.
    Letting it all go just to be free for once.
    Just allowing time to pass days, weeks, months.
    Reminds me of a little kids. They just run and run and run and run. they trip they fall they laugh they live, they're free

    Living life just how it's meant to be.
    Hanging out the passenger seat screaming I'm free.
    Taking the High Road for a long spin.
    Remembering that we're supposed to sin.
    This one makes me just smile. I have the biggest smile across my face right now...I don't know what to say about this stanza other than I like speechless.

    Let out the anger, pull in the peace.
    Hoping these feelings won't ever cease.
    Freedom is just a state of mind, the one I've got.
    Not caring whether I'm sane or not.
    This makes me laugh because it makes me think of people who are so concerned about looking like they have it all together. They are so uptight and they don't know how to live. they don't know love.
    it's when your insane when you can find love. love is insane it blows your mind. and don't ever want it to leave your heart.

    In truth, I remember what it's like to relinquish control.
    It's in God's hands, and he has my soul.
    This makes me think of like a 3rd grader. Who has a secert, he really wants to tell. but he knows he can't...kinda random..but to me it makes sense.