Comments : Hopeless case

  • 14 years ago

    by eR

    My blue eyes are mirrors and you guessed right,
    underneath my makeup is all the bruises from that fight,
    Nope I have nothing to hide,
    I just really need someone right here by my side,

    It's okay that you never knew,
    it was a secret left unsaid, suddenly said out of the blue,
    If it blew your mind I'm sorry,
    You just needed to know,

    my favorite part. it's horrible what damage one person can cause to someone's whole life.
    love your writing :)

  • 13 years ago

    by DreamingOutLoud

    I liked this poem, i can relate it to other things than child abuse.. everyone seems to have a secret inside, and you are right it needs to be heard because it burns inside.