Love you

by rocker666chick   Jun 12, 2009


I don't know what to do
I can't stop missing you.
it's been a few months,
but the pressure is on.
now you're with that stupid cunt
and our love is gone.
but it's still here in me,
I can't get rid of it
you can't see
but do you feel?
Just tell me
I need to know
I just want you to be happy
but in return I'm not
my heart is broken and eyes
blood shot
I would die just to feel your love
and touch
but we no longer talk much
and it's tearing me away
from who I am
I just need you to tell me everything's going to be OK
but I know it was all a sham

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  • 14 years ago

    by Obscura

    This is a good poem the structure is well built the rythem is smooth but there are other things you should change like half way through the poem the periods stopped you need to put some more in and it was not ended with one also because you put a swear word in it -it has to be put into the expilict catagory i can understand why you put it in this one but you can get in trouble if you do not have it in the right one

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