I Love You

by Rachelle   Jun 13, 2009


I love you for giving your heart to me and trusting me with your pride
I love you for wanting me and needing me by your side

I love you for the emotions I never
knew I had
I love you for making me smile whenever I
feel sad

I love you for your thoughts of me where I'm always on your mind
I love you for finding that part of me that I never thoght I'd find

I love you for the way you are and for how you make me feel
But most of all I love you cuz I know your mine

To my exboy friend Tanner

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  • 14 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Okay first of all, I don't like the repetition of 'I love you' There are way too many filler words eg. and, of, for, etc. as well as too many, I, me, your...I felt like that was the whole poem. Try rewording a little and make it a little more original, it seemed very cliched to me. 'Thoght' is spelt 'thought' and 'cuz' should be spelt 'cause or because. Overall this was just okay, it needs a lot of work in my opinion.

    Peace, Joe

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