Excellent work, there was so much passion and meaning portrayed in every line. A love now strong and unbreakable, and you see that it is worth fighting for. Wonderful descriptions, the flow was right on target and this was a beautiful piece. 5/5 from me, God Bless You!

~MaryAnne

"Renewing all we thought was lost
Our seed has been replanted"
^ Loved those lines :)

I thought the ending was a little bit cliche..for such a good beginning.
Good work Jenn, still not your best
Write on~

Here and now has shown me that
Our love's worth fighting for
^^^
Jenn when I read these lines it made me think of a quote I like to use ... though not my own
"Sometimes love is worth fighting for"
And it is so very true.

The darkest moment in our life
This pain we've never known
Easily we could have broken
Walked away alone
^^^
How true this is my friend ... the easy road would be to walk alone thinking it would take away the pain. Running from the pain yet in reality .. we are only running from ourselves and unfortunately our shadow will always follow.
The hard road is staying and sticking through the good and the bad ... that is love

Such a touching read my friend .... take care
~hugs~