Comments : Would you??

  • 14 years ago

    by Iris

    Lol this poem was good!!! loved the ending!!! 5/5!

  • 14 years ago

    by Good Enough

    Such a subtle poem. Very interesting way to write keep it up

  • 14 years ago

    by x3 TinyDancer3000 x3

    I love this poem! I loved the ending!! keep up the good work!

  • 14 years ago

    by Beautiful Disaster

    This poem was excellent! i loved it!
    well done
    5/5
    :D

  • 14 years ago

    by X Harlea X

    I love this poem kiki. i like the way you ended it also, sounds like something that i would say to someone lol. keep it up! ((5))

    Harlea

  • 14 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    Loved it.
    The ending was good. =]
    5/5
    -Ally.