Comments : Understanding

  • 14 years ago

    by Beautiful Disaster

    I really really like this poem
    i can relate to it in ways.

    " I think I always knew
    It was a one-way street.
    That the love I have for you,
    You simply couldn't meet."

    that is one of my favorite parts because i've been there and i know what its like
    and i think you did a great job at expressing that.
    another job well done.
    5/5

    -->Jess<--

  • 14 years ago

    by The Queen

    Very well structured, flows perfectly all through out the poem. I hope she had the chance to read it, if not then you better coz you never know what awaits for you..

  • 14 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Your poem was good and reasonably well structured, the flow was slightly broken by an uneven syllable count you might want to watch that in the future, it makes a big difference to how well your poem flows when read. Other than that it was an enjoyable read on what is obviously a subject close to your heart.
    Well done

    Grant