This is a great piece of work
i am glad to of read it :)
the part...
"The lives that paint loves lust and lies,
Forced unity toward the starless skies."
was absolutely beautiful
it was my favourite part
although i reread the poem about 6 times, no lie...
the artistic ceiling part i thought was very clever too
i did not understand it totally but
it sounded quite nice to the ears and well looked nice to the ears :)

good job :)

Keenan

I love this piece, you did such a wonderful job. Although it was short, you captured the reader and held their attention until the end. Very well-penned, good luck with the contest! Take care and keep writing, always and forever..

~MaryAnne