Comments : Harmonious Treasures~Haiku

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    This was absolutely breathtaking.. I loved your originality here describing how the arch of the rainbow shows dignity.. really well done, with your words I can imagine a rainbow with a big arch, colorful yet translucent.

    5/5. Temps!

  • 14 years ago

    by Ingrid

    MaryAnne,

    Although the words were a bit"big"for a Haiku ( or so I've learned from Kiko) it is still a very pretty piece of poetry and you should be proud of being able to create such a verse:)

    *hugs*

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 14 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    Brilliant write! A little golden nugget here.. hiding so much treasure! Loved it.. Wonderfully written!

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Very well done. Your words brought the rainbow into my vision very clearly, how it arches and gives us a chance to see its beauty even if for a limited time. Good job.

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    A Haiku finely crafted with such lovely
    images for the reader to see..well done!