How appropriate for the times we are in currently. Well done.

Great flow in this clever piece I am sure many can relate to.

WOH.. A true write.. So well expressed!
Loved it... Very well done.

Loved your last two lines, very well said.. how we're hanging on by a thread. Not much to say, impressively written! :]

5/5.

Beautiful write... its the same in every country... sometimes I wonder what the world is turning into... peace lost, humanity on the verge of declination...

your poem reflects a hard hitting truth... well penned...

A mind-blowing piece..Im glad i read it..I love the opening - evenmore until end..

5/5

Kay,

It has been a very long time since I last read your poems, but this one is just so profound I have to comment.

I think you said it all about a proud nation going down the drain. It breaks my heart to see the many homeless American people on tv and the way the future is squandered by all those who claim to be God's gift to mankind ( filling mostly their own pockets as they go).
I hope the tide will be turned before it's too late..In my country the situation is just as bad, sad to say.

Well written, an eloquent plea and a wake up call that should be read by all ( your) people:)

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

Kay
I'm so glad you posted this. You did a excellent job on this piece.
Love Cindy

Very powerful words, superbly penned.I wish that the people who governed us can read this pice.
You did an awesome job with this pice Sylvia.
An enjoyable read.
Paul...