Comments : Just You

  • 14 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    These paradox of feelings are common in romance. I believe I understand how you can feel the end of happiness and still be attracted to the one you blame

    This poem is original in style also 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Not Enough

    I like the format of the poem it's a great way to write. But the flow was a little confusing, a little off.I like the concept of the poem, it's really cute. Good job, but I think you could add a little something to it.

    Soda E>.

  • 14 years ago

    by Cate Rock

    I love this one its sooo cute!