Why do people just think of themselves?

This was a powerful and creative write, such meaning was held in your words. Excellent vocabulary though, that's what held me from start to finish, you really grabbed my attention. I also thought so much originality was shown and I could tell you worked hard on this piece, so well done. Congrats on the win, very well deserved.

Keep writing, always and forever.
Take care and have a good week.

Dis poem is very beautiful... it comes form the heart of the writer itself... you have a great mind and talent... looking forward for the rest of your poem... hope to visit my poem too...

Wow! Excellent poem. You really brought the words to life. The first stanza is captivating. I love it - descriptions, the imagery. I liked the title also. Good read.

This is a lovely lovely poem and very describtive of boredom now wonder why you got so many comments and won with this one. this has to be one of your best writings i read so far. lolz

Wow your a good writer, I loved it 5/5.