I would say this is a great piece from you however it would even look interesting if you could rephrase them by not following 4 lines each stanza..If you will notice they werent all having four lines, some lines are very long...Rephrase them like make two lines out of a sentence like that..That is just my opinion and not necessarily to be followed. I wouldnt change any word in it..

Thanks for reading my work..

Beautiful, and for me, very understandable.

I love this poem. Great job. :)

GREAT JOB!! I LOVED this one! I knew exactly what you were talking about! I have had the same thoughts!!!

An amazing write!! I have looked into a mirror like this... trying to find my inner self... the real me. Its scary. You expressed youself well I thought. An awesome write. Well done.

Olwin

Great vocabulary, and you kept it interesting unlike some of the other poems I've read. Keep up the good work. 5/5 =D

I loved this poem! great job!

This is wonderfully written. I love the last line the best. Great work! I can relate!