On That Night

by The Tay   Jun 29, 2009


She shined like the stars on the beach that night
Looking in his eyes; the source of her light
They lie on the sand and dreamed of their lives
Reading the story of the bright night sky
Hearing the waves, and watching the tide
They followed along side by side
Hand in hand they never let go
Where they are now, nobody knows
But one thing for sure, they are together
Because that night, he told her forever
So now they say on a very clear night
That they are those stars that shine so bright

(I'm going to make a second version of this because something about this one...doesn't really express what i want, but i will leave it up here anyway..to kinna show you my template of the next one...its gonna be called Love's Path)

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  • 14 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    I really enjoyed this poem, beautifull job =]
    The flow was very good and your rhyming scheme worked quite well.
    5/5