Kiss in the rain

by InvisibleHourglass   Jun 30, 2009


Rain is falling down
all around me
soaked through to the bone
but I don't feel a thing
you're kissing me gently
and the only thing I can think is love
I'm kissing you back now
want every inch of you
you're whispering words I can't comprehend
and I can't stop saying I love you
I'm gasping your name
my mind no longer filled with pain
your skin is drenched and rain is rolling off
baby this is life

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  • 14 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    I really like it... You express a very beautiful moment that is extremely romantic. I think you did a great job with this poem, however, I think the last line "baby this is life" doesn't do the poem justice... I just expected a different ending... I still think you did a good job though and I do love the meaning of it!

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