I really like your rhyme scheme, it stays constant through the whole thing. The concept is very nice. Thoughit threw me off near the end. The beginging was good, but the end just seemed to be a little different then I expected. The emotion is very 'cute.' I think the flow of the poem could be worked on if you made some of the lines a little shorter or a little longer. Overall it was a sweet but sad poem. Good job.

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WOW. JUST AMAZING. I MADE ME SHED A TEAR LOL. :') VERY BEAUTIFUL U HAVE A LOT OF TALENT

The admiration for this friend is sweet and the way you express your admiration makes me really admire this friendship. I really enjoyed reading this
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I'm at this stage right now in my life; missing someone so I thought Id read this and hope I could relate. Eye-catching title, I liked it.

This poem was full of emotion, I could feel like your heart was put onto the page.. it was that good. What a geat write; missing someone can cause pain but truly it can be a good feeling if you look deeper. Just think of what that person would think if they knew you thought of them that much; they knew you cared as much as you do, ect. A beautiful write this was; something I can somewhat relate to myself.

You did an excellent job!
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This is a really nice poem i really like it alot
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loka
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Amazing!!!! 10/5