Comments : Life ( doesn't rhyme )

  • 14 years ago

    by Ray Blue

    Great words~

    It's all a part of life, a part of life that grasps your heart
    and squeezes every ounce of blood out of it ..until there's nothing left.
    Nothing except that heartache that dwells
    within you.

    Nice ending. 5/5!

    • 10 years ago

      by Chrissy

      Thank you so much!! :)