Comments : The Imprint of His Shoe

  • 14 years ago

    by trinity

    The subject and story this poem is about is touching. The flow of the words could be worked on but with the emotion in the poem over looked.

    • 10 years ago

      by Chrissy

      Thank you!
      How would you fix the wording? :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Very powerful and so easy to read