Comments : When it comes to us

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    What can I say, brilliant write. What exactly is love? What a great question to base your poem off of. All of us have our own opinions about what love is, and how we define it is always different from how others define it. I could relate to parts of this poem myself.

    'And no matter how many times we tried
    We will always find
    The love you and I shared.'
    `Well done with this, no matter how many times two people are together, theres still that special love there, and it will never disappear, its strong and will always be shared. I agree completely with that statement!

    Well done!
    You write some amazing love poems.

  • 14 years ago

    by Ray Blue

    Thank you, Temps :)))

  • 12 years ago

    by mandy

    A beautiful bitter sweet write. I love the final ending lines. 5/5

    mandy :)