Comments : Last Night

  • 14 years ago

    by Chrissy

    Love it ( :

  • 14 years ago

    by Ray Blue

    Thanks, Chrissy!

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    'For this pale blue skies,'
    `I think this should be these

    'Poisoned by your reasons'
    `Poisoned.. wow. That was impressive. Very powerful word.. well done.

    Loved your repetition at the ending.. it was a great touch to your poem. :]

    5/5.