Good job. Different style of writing, but still a good piece of poetry. Thanks for commenting on my work. Your kind words are very much appreciated.
Kristina

hey that was a really good poem, it expressed alot of emotion for such a short thing! Kepp up the good work!

great poem, really worked and expressed everything without going into useless details, short sweet and straight to the point, good job

Great write! I can acually relate to this one.. well not all the time but most of it.! Keep up your awsome work!

I've felt that from past loves, and it hurts, but makes for gre8 poetry! Gave this a 5! Bravo!!

Sarah

short but very meaningful...

Very well put I know that feeling all to well. Keep writing!