Comments : Angel

  • 14 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    Randy,
    As I have found lately, your words seem to mesmerize me. I think this poem could have very well fallen into the love category. You have done yet another marvelous job conveying what you feel and being able to pen them into a flowing rhythmic poem. Wonderful Job!
    Take Care,
    Kay

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Could not only fit in love but maybe nature as well. It is a soothing read as most of your work is. It is not hard to imagine the scenes you describe, it is like I am transported there by your words.

  • 14 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    I read it again and Sylvia is right. It could very well fit into nature, there is always something magical about angels and the magic is definitely there in this poem. You have a tendency to be able to do that though. Beautiful poem.

  • 14 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    A delightful read! Most captivating... with beautiful images. I loved it! :]

  • 14 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Very beautiful write...
    loved the wonderful word choice... it adds so much beauty to the beauty...

    "Crimson woman of my Summer dreams,
    In the guise of a smiling angel
    Her flowing hair in the swirling wind, like fire
    Her touch, soothing me like quenching waters."

    ^^ I just loved the imagery in these lines... beautifully penned...

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Randy
    what a wonderful piece you have penned. The imagery is great as are your word choices. I treuly enjoyed the read :)
    Take Care
    Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by NightFlyer

    Thank you all for your kind words!!!! Glad you liked. A vision of angels in my minds eye during a moonlit walk inspired this one...

  • 14 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    This is a truly mind-blowing piece, and just like many others, this one deserves front page in my mind. Just the concept and thought of your whole piece made me smile and my heart leap for joy. I enjoyed reading this a lot, the imagery you created was such a treat for the reader. Stunning write, keep it up! 5/5 from me, take care..

    ~MaryAnne

  • 14 years ago

    by Jess

    I love all of your poetry.
    he ones i read anyways.
    :))
    this poem in by far my favorite though.
    I dont know why, it just is.
    dont stop writing, you have some real potential.

    And it would be greatly appriciated if you could comment and rate one of my poems.
    thanks love!

    -jesss.
    Btw:: Im putting you in my favorites ;)

  • 13 years ago

    by NightFlyer

    Thank you for your kind words, Jessica! This one was inspired by a vision I had after taking a long walk at night.