Reading it, things flowed well... singing it, there were some lines that didn't flow off the tounge as nicely. overall it was a wonderfully written poem. good work.
9 years ago
My gosh this piece is amazing. There is so much emotion, the desceiptions are amazing and I love this piece. The flow is excellent, the word choice is spactacular, you have penned a stunning piece. 5/5 of course