Reminds me of the graveyard that once was behind my house. I would sit in the window at night to see if I could spot a ghost. My son and friends would take their cameras there at night, trying to get photos of ghost. Well done and thanks for the trip back to pleasant memories.

Randy
A chilling tale put to verse. Great imagery. Reminds me of the stories we use to tell around the bonfire trying to scare ourselves :)
Good job!
Take Care
Cindy

I loved reading this! :] It brought a smile to my face. A chilling write! (reminded me of Michael Jacksons "Thriller" , HeHe) CRREEEPY. Greatstuff! HaHaaaa.

I love your word choices in this poem as well. A bit of originallity is always nice. Thanks for sharing.

Always,
Jeannie

This poem breathes fear in me.. i