Dream or Reality?

So moving and inspirational, 5/5. Em

This is fantastic :)

I dont normally read love poems lol but this is very good =]
again it was very well written, cant fault it really mate

I dreamt of the perfect one
To love me when all hope is gone
To hold me when everything is bleak
To hug me when I'm feeling weak

*I would change this line to "To protect me when I'm feeling weak" or "To comfort me when I'm feeling weak" because "hold" and "hug" are pretty much the same thing.*

To kiss me when I feel alone
*I would change this to "when I'm feeling alone" It sounds better that way to me*

To unlock feelings that are unknown
*This was my favorite line. Very well crafted.*

All along, she was there
Nobodyelse could compare

*Nobody is one word and else is one word. They need a space in between*

Mixed feelings rushing inside
Feelings that can't be denied
She said three words to melt my heart
Words that meant we couldn't be apart
Feelings reaching abnormality
Is this a dream, or reality?

*Wow..this stanza was flawless Shaun. I really love the style and the simple rhyme. I think you did a wonderful job with describing how this girl makes you feel. Your ending was my favorite. Rhetorical questions are always a nice touch to a poem. Very well written babe ^.^ Nik*

This is a very sweet poem =] It's nice to see you write something uplifting ^^

The rhyming scheme worked really well and your poem convayed very hopeful and beautiful emotions, great job.