Yes, I like this one a lot, Silvia.

In my country flowers grow abundantly, but even the wildflowers do so, in so many different colors:)

I love this format too, it looks so nice on the page and is not too repetitive, which restricts the poet in conveying his/ her message.

It is a pity they have to die. I was in a park yesterday ( rosarium), where they have all the known rose- varieties and I was too late! They were already falling out..and I was so sad, because I went there with my new cam to make pics and I could only take a few good ones.

Lovely write, made me see so many images I love:)

Thanks for sharing,

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

This is a beautiful poem about different kinds of flowers. You have some great imagery in this piece, very well done. The ending was a little sad, that summer has ended but uplifting because they will be back next year. A great write, well done! Happy to see a new poem by you :]

You have painted a really colorful work of art with your words. Very descriptive to the point of almost being able to smell the sweet scents
Enjoyable read

I have many times thought that poems about nature are in many ways better than love poems where the same old thoughts and words are written and worn out. Nature opens up the thought process and lets real creativity take place. Your poem finds just the right words and the phrases you painted let us imagine the scene you had in mind. I think your work here is "A" plus and a was a good read and a nice moment to reflect on the theme you chose. Bravo!

Sylvia,
I absolutely adore nature poems and this one is remarkable on its own. It has that charismatic feel of flowers falling and bidding farewell at the end of summer. Absolutely gorgeous poem dear.
Take Care,
Kay

Sylvia
What a beautiful piece you have penned. You did a awesome job on this form for the club challenge. Love the flowers and the way you incorprated them into your poem :)
Great job!
Love Cindy

Im loved this write Sylvia! It's beautiful :) I loved the images of the flowers you created... swaying in the wind, petals falling.
Its WONDERFUL.

Blue skies, grassy fields, wildflowers,
yellow daisies standing up tall,
pink and white larkspur growing wild.
Petal by petal, blossoms fall.

I liked this opening verse for it just put me
right in that spot..very nice!

Spring breeze blowing, green grass swaying,
flowers dancing in place for all
to see their delicate ballet.
Petal by petal, blossoms fall.

This is another lovely picture to see the
flowers dancing..a beautiful picture drawn
with words...good one!
The form as well as the poem is done very
nicely..liked the read :)

A wonderful write of one of natuures beauty.
You did a marvelous job with this piece Sylvia.
An enjoyable read.
Keep up the great work.
Paul...

Repeating lines can be tricky but I think you have done a lovely job with this piece. Everything blends and flows nicely and it was an enjoyable read.

Your last stanza is my favorite part, I enjoyed the word choice and it brought everything together nicely. Good work.