Beautiful and passionate

by Goodbye   Jul 17, 2009


Every single rain drop
sparkling crystal clear
Sun kisses your feet
Grass under our feet is
like a red carpet
You walk towards to me
You smile makes the clouds escape
In the moment this world looks so much
Beautiful and passionate

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In the moment of inspiration -to my muse CJ with love. All comments are appriciated. Have a wonderful day!Much love, Noor :)

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  • 14 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    Love is an amazing thing and no matter how many words we try to sum it up in it's only the actions that can truly show someone can feel for another soul. This was a cute poem and I happen to be a great friend with CJ so I know why you could feel something like this for him. :] Hold onto love and life, for it can give you very good things as long as you keep your arms open.

  • 14 years ago

    by Sourav

    Hi...
    Very genuine emotions as it seems to me. Tender and full of love. Great to see you back!

  • 14 years ago

    by Kid Kurious

    I really like this piece! Short and simple, yet "Beautiful and Passionate" =P
    Keep it up!

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