Great way to put it. its a messy poem like u said and it reminds me of a messy relationship with your father. i really like it

very powerful in all otehr sense. i know what ur going through

Messy messy messy is indeed a style!! like hair :P haha jk it was great meaningful write... i felt emotions... just from letters put together... thank you for making me feel alive... emotions are the only way to prove that ur living! so i appreciate that... now... don't lose vision... and dont break... you seem... like a beautiful soul and heart from the words you say... dont make bad judgments... dont let anyone tell you otherwise!!

A very honest and forthright write. Sometimes things change over time and people of another generation don't change with them.....It is good that you stand for what is right in your mind! I enjoyed it very much!

I really liked this one alot , so outspoken .& the format to which you wrote it was perfect for the message it expressed. To me there was one verse that stood out way above all othere .......A mask of deception
You care about nothing more
But appearance
Making a "perfect" picture
To the untrained eye...............................
Making A perfect picture to the untrained eye,
This I like , I see this so much in the influence portrayed in todays society & especially the media & it really saddens me that we buy into it so whole heartedly
Keep standing for your belief's Kayle & keep writing for us to enjoy .....5/5.....Jim