Comments : Pointless.

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    I sometimes we all feel things are pointless. What I take from this is that once we start to useful hateful, hurtful words, causing harm to a loved one, there is no turning back from them if we are filled with such anger at them. Well done.

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Steve
    This piece is filled with so much emotion.

    Wounds created that will not
    heal with time, taken with us
    to our coffins.

    Sometimes things done and words said cannot be forgotten they cut to deeply.

    Hate fueled in the flash of a
    second, unthinking and
    cannot be undone even though
    deep inside you know the truth.

    So many times the truth doesn't matter when others eyes are clouded over by falsehoods.

    Great job!
    Love and hugs
    Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Hate fueled in the flash of a
    second, unthinking and
    cannot be undone even though
    deep inside you know the truth.

    I like this part. Hate is like a poison that will kill a good heart. Your words show this very clearly. Good write!

  • 14 years ago

    by Christopher Wry

    Amen to that words have power so lets put them to good use.