Awesome poem!!...I love the title of it!

3rd stanza L4
A 'who-dies-first' contest
In a ----------------------- perhaps?
6th stanza L3
If this is was losing you feels like,
--------- what ------------------------ perhaps?

Rhymes beautifully and flows well an excellent start and a strong finish.

An excellent poem any one who is old enough and has share love with someone then lost it orhas been hurt by him or her knows the feelings you have so strongly written in your poem 5/5 Ray S

I liked the imagination and creativity in this. There isn't another like it that I have read. Your flow was effortless an excellent write.
Enjoyable

I am one of those poet that is impressed with expression over any unknown skills that many seem to site as they wish to place poetry out of the reach of those who have not been officially accepted into the quote literary world. None the less you expressed eloquently enough something I have felt.