Breath-taking! Absolutly beautiful! 5/5!
6/5 - (if I could!!!)

The lady stood still with her broken wings,
Her golden harp she played on a moonlight bliss
Like the butterflies entwined with water lilies
The lady's heart filled with sorrow, yet she sings

^^This opening stanza sets the mood and the scene of a beautiful maiden/angle with a heaviness in her hear..its like a tender portrait..very nice!

The lady stood still with her broken wings,
Serene as the rain, the gentle call
Skies shattered in thunderstorm,
She stood still through the strong winds

^^This portrays a strong willed woman who is never going to back down nor cower because of the storms of life..I like this part!

Her echoes of sadness painted her daylight,
Her smile shadowed the darkest of night
Only her wings brushed heaven's tearful eyes,
The lady stood still, her melancholies took flight

^^Reminds me of mother nature. Whatever rubbish people are doing to her land she still provides all the beauty and the warmth to this world. I find this symbolic.

Overall, this whole poem is like a picture poem where words paint vivid image for the reader with a touch of deep sadness..liked the read.
Thank you also for the comment..take care.

A vibrant poem alive with images and emotion. Each line each stanza stands on it's own' complimenting the other.
Excellent in every way