Comments : Day Kisses Night. [Collab]

  • 14 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    This was such a fun collab Temps, thanks for doing it with me. We finally got some inspiration! I really feel like we both did a great job, your part especially just blew me away. Have a great day, and hopefully we can do this another time!

    God bless you!

    ~MaryAnne

  • 14 years ago

    by Ingrid

    This was really beautiful, girls:)

    Very poetic language. In poetry it is all about using the right adjectives to make a piece that is memorable:)

    Passion flares
    stain royal blue skies
    a sanguine tint.

    ^^

    Like here "royal bleu"and " sanguine" are well chosen to create an image. It is the icing on the proverbial cake.

    Neat:)

    *hugs*

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 14 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    This was a beautiful poem. Simply said with a steady flow. Enjoyable in every way.