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Short form but powerful words and the truth of any addiction. Well done.
Nice flow... and that's also in a difficult form of poetry. Very well done!
by End Of Eternity
Elegantly written, short simple but deep...very deep indeed.
all the best and take care
Short and simple but it packs a punch i loved it you described additction quite nicely 5/5
by TJ Arizona Eagle
The title caught my attention . The simple powerful words pulled me in. For so few words you packed a punch and made the reader feel each word
This one really hit me. So short, but you built on it with every word. Strong and powerful piece <3 it. Also I liked that you did a different form :) 5
You could probably teach me how to write poetry :)
by Robert Gardiner
Very Nicely Done!!!
Veru Nikcely Penned!!!
Beautifully done. So powerful