Comments : Addiction (Tetractys)

  • 13 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Short form but powerful words and the truth of any addiction. Well done.

  • 13 years ago

    by Sourav

    Nice flow... and that's also in a difficult form of poetry. Very well done!

  • 13 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Elegantly written, short simple but deep...very deep indeed.

    all the best and take care

  • 13 years ago

    by Nobody

    Short and simple but it packs a punch i loved it you described additction quite nicely 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    The title caught my attention . The simple powerful words pulled me in. For so few words you packed a punch and made the reader feel each word
    Very Impressive

  • 12 years ago

    by ibelievedhim

    This one really hit me. So short, but you built on it with every word. Strong and powerful piece <3 it. Also I liked that you did a different form :) 5


  • 12 years ago

    by Kitty

    You could probably teach me how to write poetry :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Very Nicely Done!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Veru Nikcely Penned!!!

  • 9 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    VERY NICE!!!

  • 6 years ago

    by Em

    Beautifully done. So powerful