Short form but powerful words and the truth of any addiction. Well done.

Nice flow... and that's also in a difficult form of poetry. Very well done!

Elegantly written, short simple but deep...very deep indeed.

all the best and take care

Short and simple but it packs a punch i loved it you described additction quite nicely 5/5

The title caught my attention . The simple powerful words pulled me in. For so few words you packed a punch and made the reader feel each word
Very Impressive

This one really hit me. So short, but you built on it with every word. Strong and powerful piece <3 it. Also I liked that you did a different form :) 5

Katie

You could probably teach me how to write poetry :)

Very Nicely Done!!!

Veru Nikcely Penned!!!

VERY NICE!!!

Beautifully done. So powerful